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The mighty and clever and mighty clever

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<p style="border: 1px solid black; padding: 3px;"><strong>Originally published at <a href="">Sythyry</a>. Please leave any <a href="">comments</a> there.</strong></p><p> The mighty and clever and mighty clever <lj<br /> user="beetiger"/> has persuaded me that<br /> <i>A Marriage of Insects</i> needs more conflict and drama<br /> (which is true), and that one minor character could be<br /> promoted to a more major one and provide all the necessary<br /> drama (which is true and delightful). </p> <p> Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite, rewrite&#8230;</p> <p><script type="text/javascript">SHARETHIS.addEntry({ title: "", url: "" });</script></p>
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